Last Friday we had some lovely sunny weather here in Notts today.
I’ve been in the back garden clearing up all the fallen leaves from winter.
Something I intended to do way before now.
I was going through some of my past emails from various people.
When I came across this ONE email.
As I read the email, I burst out laughing.
It’s a great example of how NOT to write an email when looking for business.
Are you ready for this?
“As I randomly came across your “Niche Goldmine”, and being honest, unfortunately neither your sales page not your website looks so professional to be opted by your targeted customers.
I’m a web-developer and I make
- Super professional webpages
- Online courses
- Super fast loading pages than HTML
- Mobile responsive pages
- Proper SEO rankings and much more.
I can also provide you a proper portfolio where you can
· Find all the people who signed up
· track of people who were on your checkout page yet didn’t purchase your product.
link all kinds of automations with the portfolio I provide.
Here are some of my super professional landing pages that are fit for you or may match your interest.”
Dude what the f*ck?
Like sure ‘I’ll hire you!’
After all you’ve only told me how crap my sales page and website are…Lol.
I don’t think this guy’s going to have many clients lined up, do you?
That’s where having a simple strategy for how to write a half decent email to a potential prospect comes in handy.
And it’s the same for other parts of your business from product creation to affiliate marketing…
Zaf.
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